My Love

Circle of trust wealth held in its reign
is the moon shining with you
as it silver sparkles tonight inside thoughts 

I will blow a kiss golden melting 
over oceans wide washed into her pearly white beam 
in the hope it kisses the dream  

In the morning with golden sun rays 
a shining treasure forever glistens 
each one warmed by your beauty 

Dewdrops are the stars clustered
weeping silver precious dawning daylight 
the sunbeams forever smiling on you


Unrhymed Tercet

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Connie Marcum Wong

July 7, 2015 at 5:32 PM

Your poem is truly the kind of poem poet's searh to read Liam. It has all the classic romance and visual lovelyness one could ask for! 7

Gary Bateman

July 1, 2015 at 6:28 PM

Liam Mate!! Most excellent indeed!! The words and the images are perfect. The Leprechaun Choir is singing its praise approval on this write!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 1, 2015 at 2:30 PM

- This is a beautiful and loving poem, dear friend Liam - I blow a warmly summer kiss to you from Norway :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

June 28, 2015 at 10:05 PM

Very beautiful Liam

Dorian Petersen Potter

June 28, 2015 at 9:39 PM

Hi Liam!A very beautiful captivating and most romantic love poem penned by you my dearest friend.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I just love it!A very beautiful dreamy,romantic,passionate,sweet love piece to be held very close to my heart.smiling.A very tender, enchanting piece.A real gem!I enjoyed it a lot.A 7 +++!A fav.Your pen is mighty golden!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic,gentle and sweet.Keep your Faith!Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^