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My Love

Circle of trust wealth held in its reign is the moon shining with you as it silver sparkles tonight inside thoughts I will blow a kiss golden melting over oceans wide washed into her pearly white beam in the hope it kisses the dream In the morning with golden sun rays a shining treasure forever glistens each one warmed by your beauty Dewdrops are the stars clustered weeping silver precious dawning daylight the sunbeams forever smiling on you Unrhymed Tercet

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Date: 7/7/2015 5:32:00 PM
Your poem is truly the kind of poem poet's searh to read Liam. It has all the classic romance and visual lovelyness one could ask for! 7
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Date: 7/1/2015 6:28:00 PM
Liam Mate!! Most excellent indeed!! The words and the images are perfect. The Leprechaun Choir is singing its praise approval on this write!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 7/1/2015 2:30:00 PM
- This is a beautiful and loving poem, dear friend Liam - I blow a warmly summer kiss to you from Norway :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/28/2015 10:05:00 PM
Very beautiful Liam
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Date: 6/28/2015 9:39:00 PM
Hi Liam!A very beautiful captivating and most romantic love poem penned by you my dearest friend.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I just love it!A very beautiful dreamy,romantic,passionate,sweet love piece to be held very close to my heart.smiling.A very tender, enchanting piece.A real gem!I enjoyed it a lot.A 7 +++!A fav.Your pen is mighty golden!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic,gentle and sweet.Keep your Faith!Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 6/28/2015 6:22:00 PM
Beautiful thoughts wrapped in rich metaphors and imagery, Liam. Loved it!
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