My Love

To come and lay down words is once a task, A life without you means but my defeat To love someone behind their plastic mask, Sweet words become a puzzle, now complete. Desire doth now cloud my sight and mind, A painted work compares to bursting love It seems as now the stars become aligned, I wouldn't doubt a song leaks from above. A melody from Heaven will seem dark, When all the earth wakes from its little dream, The seraphs call for worlds to pause and hark, Just to see your face, a radiant beam. God calls for quiet when you speak a word, There's nothing you will say that won't be heard.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 8/15/2011 1:24:00 PM
What a way to start off a new week but to read some fresh new poetry. Thank you for sharing your amazing writing with us Cloud. Hoping you have a wonderful week full of hope, love, good health, and much inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2011 9:35:00 AM
Dear Cloud (Please forgive me as I know not rather you are he or she) but the words you write within this poem are what poetry ought to be...thoughtful beyond comprehension and present dimension. And thanks for your kind thoughts concerning my "Syncronicity" poem as well. Do keep up the excellent writing and stay connected. Terrell Martin
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