My Love

Love  it hurts,
cause for you is not worth,
Sometimes I know you didn't love me, 
But deep inside my heart I gave my whole life,

I cried because you lied,
But all I can say is why,
Did I do something wrong,  
Or isn't my love too strong,

You said you love me,
I expect that it would be,
But you are a liar,
I want you to burn in fire,
But I don't want to,
Because I love you,

when I see you crying ,
I want to hold you but I'm not lying,
You can cry on my shoulder,
But I'll tell you I'm not  your stalker,

When,What, Where,
I will tell you I'll be there ,
This heartaches end,
And I will accept you as a friend.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 12:01 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 21, 2016 at 10:08 PM
Hex, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 8:50 PM
hex, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
Brown Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 10:12 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Nunuychinu. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Love, Carol
Palli Avatar
December 19, 2010 at 12:26 AM
can feel the emotions! well expressed.
Mehta Avatar
December 18, 2010 at 4:43 AM
Nice write on friendship with touchy emotions, Nunuychinu
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