My Love

My best friend That is what I call him Within in his Earshot Privately, I call him Something Much more Intimate: My Love Constantly Admiring but always From afar Always dreaming, Ever hoping That one day He would Return my Feelings. But 'tis A dream and nothing more

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Susan Palli

Date: 11/10/2010 12:32:00 PM

can feel the want

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/21/2010 12:13:00 PM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Chelsea. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/21/2010 7:44:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry today... and its creative theme... hope u check out the contest scene offered to new members... good luck with luv...

Suresh Iyer

Date: 10/21/2010 12:24:00 AM

may your dreams be fulfilled Suresh