"my Love"

Your a sweet vision 
              a pure beauty untouched by time
                                                to cherish and hold..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 10, 2012 at 8:17 PM
on the 8th day of x-mass my true love gave to me.. 8 cherished moments... 7 sexy sins...6 sipping cups... 5 moments of you and me....4 kissing songs.. 3 old pens.. 2 cradles of love ... and a warm place in his arms and fair tree....
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November 22, 2010 at 12:52 AM
Thank you for your comment on "Wallpapered, Soloed Nudity" This is a very loving poem , Made with true love untouched by the world.
Fraser Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 2:17 PM
Breathtaking Senyru Michael >> James
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October 17, 2010 at 8:41 AM
A gentle, tender and loving senryu, Michael. If you really love someone, you tend not to notice how they age as you are always looking at them through the eyes of love. Beautifully written! Love, Carolyn
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October 17, 2010 at 7:45 AM
a sweet lovely and full of beauty of a write, enjoyed,..P.D.
Dietrich Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 12:44 AM
I'm sure she will cherish this!! I'm nodding off. So off I must go very soon....
Galua Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 11:16 PM
just love to visualize what you have written...it's like time stops...^_^ v
Roberts Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 6:57 AM
lovely senryu
Mehta Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 4:46 AM
Nice romantic write and nice image of beauty, Michael
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