My Love

My Love for you is like a river... it goes on and on... and then it gets to hot... and then it dries up... it cracks... into a hundred pieces.. I find a new source. And it goes on again... and splits for a minuet over a rock... But the love keep going on... when I look in my "river".. I see hope... and love... and never ending friendship.. The hert is together.. then split.. then back together... with the endless river of love.... I you
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June 11, 2010 at 9:09 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Brittany. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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June 10, 2010 at 5:49 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Family.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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