My Love

Wishing on a falling star,
from a distance, very far
Wishing for my love tonight,
though my love is not in sight

I can feel her in my soul,
though the distance, won't console
I can feel her silken hair,
as a summer breeze, swims the air

I feel a tingling, in my spine,
knowing that her love is mine
I see her beauty, in a stream,
wondering, what does that mean

I hear her voice, she's whispering,
so sweet and soft, a breath of spring
Soon my love, I shall be there
our love will fill the summer air



 To the love of my life...Mary. I love you Honey !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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December 7, 2009 at 9:10 PM
Beautiful love poem from your pen, Richard... oh to find that kind of love.. I see Jared wrote a love poem too today as did I .. wave lengths on same page... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie.. "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup
Pickett Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 8:23 AM
AWWWWW... when I write about love, I write about loving myself.....HeHe....Good write pop, I can feel the passion........JP]
Delacroix Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 7:22 PM
Oh, I guess I didn't look up the other comments your received. She sure did read it. Till I read you again, my regards, Caroline.
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December 2, 2009 at 7:20 PM
That is a very sweet love poem and I hope she reads it. Very well written in great imagery and rhymes. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on my poem. Are you perhaps related to Jared Pickett, another poet on this site? Welcome to the soup. I look forward to reading more of your poems. Caroline.
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December 2, 2009 at 5:46 PM
so sweet!! keep up the good works!!
Gumbo Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 4:51 PM
So romantic Richard. Wonderful and a beautiful tribute to your wife! Many smiles. :)
Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 4:51 PM
Aww thanks sweetie for this beautiful write I love you too and you are the love of my life too as well you know...superb rhyme...great flow....hugs & kisses..Mary
Sweetheart Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 4:22 PM
Romantic poetry from your pen, Richard, and such simple beautiful flowing words.. enjoyed.. blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "sweetheart"
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December 2, 2009 at 2:50 PM
Beautiful write for your loved one and I know that she appreciates it. Keep the magical pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara
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