My Love

My love for you can never be broken
Your actions speak louder then words can be spoken
I'm grateful of you in everything that you do
I'm grateful for all these feelings I have for you, even you already knew
MV you're the greatest man I've ever could imagine
Patient, kind, protective as well gentle and understanding
Taking vows for the win
I promised to love you through thick an thin
I promised to be there for you whether rich or poor
I promised the world an then some more
To stand by you as a team in everything that comes our way
My love, for this I give my word an will never betray or go astray
You are my rock, my golden tree, my everything
You do so many things that our family can positively look up to an look forward of ten times eternaty
The ideal role model as well father who's dependable, reliable, words I can not express the amount of
As many times I thanked the lord above it just doesnt seem to be enough
My love for this, is why I write
You've given me the passion and beauty to without fright
Without doubt, without burdens or even second guesses of regressions
You have me to always feel calm in your presence
You're truly my bestfriend who I can speak to about anything whether dark or passionate in nature of essence
You're my future that my past has been longing for
Loving you is easy as well fulfills me entirely outside and in to the core
My love, we share a bond like no other
Its continuous, free willing and, never teeth pulling
As we watch our children grow 
Just remember these words that you already know
That when the good lord takes my last breath
My love, I'll be still by you as well waiting to finish our walk together that never left

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 12/8/2019 3:09:00 PM
Lovely poem of commitment..
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Date: 11/2/2019 2:08:00 PM
This line alone is sheer wonderful poetry -"You are my rock, my golden tree, my everything"
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Mystery Writer
Date: 11/2/2019 2:24:00 PM
So thankful you had enjoyed. Many blessings :)
Date: 11/2/2019 2:05:00 PM
Hello Mystery Writer, so nice to meet you. Oh you should read this poem to your wife, because it is romantic. have a nice day my friend. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/6/2019 12:54:00 PM
Oh how nice. to be named after the husband is very nice. I like this idea. Have a nice day my friend.I very happy for you.
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Mystery Writer
Date: 11/3/2019 5:49:00 AM
I'm having a boy and he will be a Jr :) We are so excited for his coming! I will certainly update you Darlene :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/2/2019 5:33:00 PM
Hello Mystery Writer, oh how nice .This poem went to his heart. So romantic. Are you having a girl or boy?Names picked out? Looking forward to hear about the baby when it is born. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Mystery Writer
Date: 11/2/2019 2:23:00 PM
Nice meeting you as well :) I most certainly did read this to my husband lol He got tearful an hugged me as he spoke to my belly. We are expecting in December. Sending many blessings to you new friend *hugs*
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