Eve Roper Poet Alliteration

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My Lost and Found Love

Love lost; love found.

My Love Lost,

Like lancinate waves that ebb and flow lapping on
Lacerated lace, laid hold labored and languid,
Lonesome, lucid breathing, labile labiate sand.

My Laborious Love found,

Like a linear lattice of limitless love,
Leaps as a leaf spin with the wind, as truth in life.
Loops around labyrinthine of emotions,
Loyalty evolving of labored lasting roots.


3/20/2022

My Lost And Found Love Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: JCB Brul

lancinate- painful as if caused by a sharp instrument
labiate - resembling or possessing a lip or labium

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Connie Marcum Wong April 24, 2022 at 8:38 PM WOW Eve, this poem is brilliant! I am so glad to see it garnered First place! Congratulations! Blessings xxoo Eve Roper April 24, 2022 at 9:12 PM Thank you , Connie.

Howard Kerr April 22, 2022 at 7:20 PM Congratulations Eve on your first place medal. Well done and well deserved. An exceptional work. Howard

Andrea Dietrich March 23, 2022 at 3:38 PM wow, so lovely. I find L words to be the most beautiful in the English language. it's such a soothing consonant.

Jennifer Proxenos March 22, 2022 at 12:51 AM You have always been a star with different styles of poetry, this one being no exception all the best for the contest my friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer

Silent One March 21, 2022 at 1:59 PM Great alliteration in your poem...interesting thoughts also.

Silent One March 21, 2022 at 1:59 PM Great alliteration in your poem...interesting thoughts also.

Silent One March 21, 2022 at 1:58 PM Great alliteration in your poem...interesting thoughts also.

L Milton Hankins March 20, 2022 at 7:41 PM Best of luck in the contest, Eve. This is quite good. I'm not trying this one, mainly because I have not one, single good idea to work with that I can alliterate. I wrote a poem, but I didn't enter it because it didn't meet the requirements.

Jan Allison March 20, 2022 at 4:01 PM wow wow wow amazing alliteration Eve and I've learned some new words, good luck in the contest:-) xx

Rico Leffanta March 20, 2022 at 12:19 PM Reminds me of the French adage: Two tears were floating down the river, said one, "I am the tear of a girl who lost her lover". Replied the other, "I am the tear of the girl who found him" . . . . . Good luck in the contest!