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My Lost and Found Love

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Love lost; love found. My Love Lost, Like lancinate waves that ebb and flow lapping on Lacerated lace, laid hold labored and languid, Lonesome, lucid breathing, labile labiate sand. My Laborious Love found, Like a linear lattice of limitless love, Leaps as a leaf spin with the wind, as truth in life. Loops around labyrinthine of emotions, Loyalty evolving of labored lasting roots. 3/20/2022 My Lost And Found Love Poetry Contest Sponsored by: JCB Brul lancinate- painful as if caused by a sharp instrument labiate - resembling or possessing a lip or labium

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/24/2022 8:38:00 PM

WOW Eve, this poem is brilliant! I am so glad to see it garnered First place! Congratulations! Blessings xxoo

Eve Roper
Date: 4/24/2022 9:12:00 PM

Thank you , Connie.

Howard Kerr

Date: 4/22/2022 7:20:00 PM

Congratulations Eve on your first place medal. Well done and well deserved. An exceptional work. Howard

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/23/2022 3:38:00 PM

wow, so lovely. I find L words to be the most beautiful in the English language. it's such a soothing consonant.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/22/2022 12:51:00 AM

You have always been a star with different styles of poetry, this one being no exception all the best for the contest my friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer

Silent One

Date: 3/21/2022 1:59:00 PM

Great alliteration in your poem...interesting thoughts also.

Silent One

Date: 3/21/2022 1:59:00 PM

Great alliteration in your poem...interesting thoughts also.

Silent One

Date: 3/21/2022 1:58:00 PM

Great alliteration in your poem...interesting thoughts also.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/20/2022 7:41:00 PM

Best of luck in the contest, Eve. This is quite good. I'm not trying this one, mainly because I have not one, single good idea to work with that I can alliterate. I wrote a poem, but I didn't enter it because it didn't meet the requirements.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/20/2022 4:01:00 PM

wow wow wow amazing alliteration Eve and I've learned some new words, good luck in the contest:-) xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/20/2022 12:19:00 PM

Reminds me of the French adage: Two tears were floating down the river, said one, "I am the tear of a girl who lost her lover". Replied the other, "I am the tear of the girl who found him" . . . . . Good luck in the contest!