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My Losses, No Gains

Last night i had a dream, in the dream all of my closest friends were there with me waiting for him. An old friend who everyone missed. The door opened and he stood there with no expression on his face. Silence was cast throughout the room like a ghost not seen but noticed, until the close friends attacked him. Not violently but happily with joyous laughs and fun. Everyone and thing disintegrates into black and two large drapes fell from my view and i was in my room. I found my awareness, and realized the old friend was never coming through that door. As my thoughts diminished i say to myself, goodbye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/10/2011 6:07:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry and wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Ethan. May inspiration come into your soul each and every day. I will stop in at the Soup and see how you are doing from time to time. Love and best wishes always, Carol
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