My Lord, My God

My LORD,MY GOD.
Aye ave seen wat you do,
Before and even now,
Can any man stand before you?
Demanding any sort of redemption!

Each one has their loads,
For each carries big tonnes,
Gone are the weights that they had,
How merciful can you get?

Indeed I see them tears,
Just like a river rolling,
Keeping my puffy cheeks all damp and wet,
Love? Love you have for me the sinner!!

My heart once cold and defeated,
Now sings and dances in my chest
Of course twas never by my strength or might, the…
Power to heal it was all yours.

Quakes and thunders,
Robbed me of my sweet peace,
Sickness had robbed me of all my hope,
The joy of living seemed all lost.

Under the pressure I succumbed,
Vowing to rise but falling again,
With my clothes all torn and in rags,
Xtermely tired did I feel.

Yet you gave me your strength
     Yet you wiped me tears away
       Yet you saw me!.. me as worthy!!
Zeal and strength could not achieve
         Zero it all was without you
           Zero it still is without you Lord.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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