My Lord, Just One Day With You

My Lord, Just One Day With You..... My Lord, just one day with you will bring my life back from all the sins that I have done myself Its true when you had time for me to talk then I was not prepared to listen to you But now I realized that your golden words are the precious to listen and live in this world My Lord, just one day with you will erased all my worries from my heart which I have made through sins Its true you want me to be good and listen to your precepts but I did not obliged to your words But now I realized that your precepts are precious to learn and live happy life in this world My Lord, just one day with you will bring happiness into my heart from learning all the lesson from you Its true when I am under your shelter then the heaven will keep me away from my worries and fears But now I realized that without your heavenly blessings there is no decent life for me in this world my Lord. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2016 Ravi Sathasivam
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Date: 10/25/2016 4:23:00 AM
Great and wonderfully penned! Thank you for sharing Ravi. God bless!
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Date: 10/21/2016 8:44:00 PM
this is a wonderfull poem. made me cry for so many reasons. keep writing xxx
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Date: 10/16/2016 3:00:00 AM
Fabulous, beautiful, outstanding, are just a few words that I can write to describe the way I feel about your poem!!!! When you get time, read my poems, Lost & Found, Everything Has Changed, and Chain Reaction. I feel you will really enjoy them, in my opinion. Keep up the amazing work, you never know who you may influence to accept Jesus into their heart, so they can have eternal life!!!! I give you a standing ovation!!! -Misty Johnson
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Date: 10/7/2016 7:18:00 AM
This is a very beautiful prayer and poem my dear friend, Ravi. I'll fave this. Thank you so much. love lots and hug, Leonora
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Date: 10/3/2016 1:45:00 PM
Ravi, a beautiful conversation with blessings to come... Linda
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/6/2016 6:15:00 AM
Thanks for reading my poem my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 10/1/2016 4:47:00 PM
An extreme great piece.........A.M.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/6/2016 6:16:00 AM
Thanks for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 9/26/2016 9:02:00 PM
I found this very uplifting, and inspirational!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/6/2016 6:17:00 AM
Thanks for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 9/26/2016 6:49:00 PM
A prayer for cleansing of sins...Nicely penned Ravi
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/6/2016 6:17:00 AM
Thanks for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 9/26/2016 3:29:00 PM
Wonderful, Ravi! Good to see you today.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/6/2016 6:17:00 AM
Thanks for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 9/26/2016 2:01:00 PM
A remarkable poem Ravi. A fav from me
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/6/2016 6:18:00 AM
Thanks for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 9/26/2016 1:01:00 PM
perfectly said.....nice words
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/6/2016 6:18:00 AM
Thanks for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 9/26/2016 12:15:00 PM
Oh my friend, you have penned a great poem. It touches the heart and I love how it flows. Excellent poet.........A.M.
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Date: 10/6/2016 6:18:00 AM
Thanks for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 9/26/2016 9:37:00 AM
This poem sounds very sincere to me, Ravi. If you are able to spend one day with God, then you'll realize that you can also do so for the rest of your life! Regards // paul
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/6/2016 6:18:00 AM
Thanks for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 9/26/2016 8:41:00 AM
Wonderfully written my friend, Ravi. Inspiring and full of faith. Even a minute with our Lord will be enough for things to be put in place but a whole day will be Bliss!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/6/2016 6:19:00 AM
Thanks for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 9/26/2016 7:27:00 AM
- A beautiful confession to God, Ravi - Honest from heart - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/26/2016 7:55:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dearest friend Anne. Appreciated. Love and hugs xxxx - Ravi
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