My Longing --- Song That Luc Bat Sonnet
It's over one year you left
from our happy nest, didn't chase
to know how I'm to face
the world, my disgrace never thought.
With ego you fought each time
didn't care anytime, how much
you hurt my faith with such
words, how did it touch my longing.
Instead of walking away,
could you not find way to keep
vows intact; made me weep
thinking which acts sweep adoring.
Quiet sobs are you hearing,
how can you be uncaring?
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