My Loins Are Aflame

Burning with passion my loins are aflame My eyes are quite round, really going insane Becoming quite unsteady My mind is like spaghetti Her stuff makes me quiver, pulls this old guy's chain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Cunningham Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 8:12 AM
Is chain another name for, never mind. Suggest you go bottomless outside and sit in the snow, that'll cool you down lol
Ellison Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 8:47 AM
Think I'll pass on that! But thanks for trying to help!!! LOL
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 7:33 AM
Sounds like you're being served up by a saucy waitress at the spaghetti joint. ;),
Ellison Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 7:50 AM
Ha! Love it... you and me eh, whatta team!!! XOX
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