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My Loins Are Aflame

Burning with passion my loins are aflame My eyes are quite round, really going insane Becoming quite unsteady My mind is like spaghetti Her stuff makes me quiver, pulls this old guy's chain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 1/20/2020 8:12:00 AM
Is chain another name for, never mind. Suggest you go bottomless outside and sit in the snow, that'll cool you down lol
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Jack Ellison
Date: 1/20/2020 8:47:00 AM
Think I'll pass on that! But thanks for trying to help!!! LOL
Date: 1/20/2020 7:33:00 AM
Sounds like you're being served up by a saucy waitress at the spaghetti joint. ;),
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Jack Ellison
Date: 1/20/2020 7:50:00 AM
Ha! Love it... you and me eh, whatta team!!! XOX

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