My Little Bitter Battle With Pain

I never thought I'd weep so bitterly, Perhaps, I perceived I was stronger, A lion, But my heart was in pain, Torn into pieces and weary, My eyes were ever teary, It was just me... And my broken heart to keep me company.

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/13/2017 10:48:00 PM

Beautiful write, Hempstone - congrats on your win!

Kabutha Paul Hempstone
Date: 10/14/2017 5:53:00 AM

Thank you Sir Gregory

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/13/2017 4:28:00 AM

Congratulations Hempstone on your win with this beautifully written poem of bitter heartbreaking heartache. Enjoyed!

Mugo Muriithi

Date: 10/12/2017 11:06:00 AM

...and poetry in itself is all ocean, perhaps where antagonisms are cleansed. and there a new cycle reborn. words conjoined emotively into a perfect embrace. its like our soul is cleansed...