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My Liquid Mind

~My Liquid Mind~ Like a forceful stream from a magnificent mountain, does my opalescent mind slide. Commanding of any crevice or rock in its path,to gracefully, move aside. It dances in flowers, grass, trees, and never once looks back. It laughs joyfully, as a child on a warm summer beach at play. Rushing and splashing with a bubbling freedom,with gusto on clear display. Meteorically with a curiosity , it hunts down boulder-strewn foes. And yet,it's quality is grateful humility. Plus, a loving heart,all of its own. Be careful as my liquid mind, when it's very star-lit still one summery night.. May just decide to visit you! Seeping, surreptitiously and....very lovingly,seep right through your window sill. August 16, 2019 Panagiota Romios 9:30am PST

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/17/2019 5:47:00 PM

An amazing, spiritual write; had to fav.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/17/2019 6:27:00 PM

What an honor for you to FAV. Wow!this was a difficult one for me. Gratefully. Panagiota

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/16/2019 8:35:00 PM

You are welcome. We are universal. And all part of one reality. Division or individuality is an illusion of consciousness. But, for example, as when one turns his heart and mind over to the Christ, it does not mean a loss--to the contrary, it means manifold enrichment of personality and experience. We are far greater than most of us realize and are willing to explore. Becoming one with others is never diminishing. Excellent read! Thank you.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/16/2019 8:50:00 PM

Thank you for your contemplative comments. You covered many ares in them. I so appreciate your time and input here, Joe. Panagiota God Bless you,

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/16/2019 4:43:00 PM

fluent drift of thought, panagiota... very nice!...huggs

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/16/2019 4:47:00 PM

Thank you, Nette, really appreciate your Sweet comment, Panagiota