My Liquid Mind

~My Liquid Mind~

Like a forceful stream from a
magnificent mountain, does 
my opalescent mind slide.
Commanding of any crevice or
rock in its path,to gracefully, 
move aside.

It dances in flowers, grass, trees,
and never once looks back.
It laughs joyfully, as a child on 
a warm summer beach at play.
Rushing and splashing with a
bubbling freedom,with gusto on
clear display.

Meteorically with a curiosity , it
hunts down boulder-strewn foes.
And yet,it's quality is grateful humility.
Plus, a loving heart,all of its own.

Be careful as my liquid mind, when 
it's very star-lit still one summery night..
May just decide to visit you!
Seeping, surreptitiously and....very 
lovingly,seep right through your window sill.

August 16, 2019

Panagiota Romios
9:30am PST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kiser Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 5:47 PM
An amazing, spiritual write; had to fav.
Romios Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 6:27 PM
What an honor for you to FAV. Wow!this was a difficult one for me. Gratefully. Panagiota
DiMino Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 8:35 PM
You are welcome. We are universal. And all part of one reality. Division or individuality is an illusion of consciousness. But, for example, as when one turns his heart and mind over to the Christ, it does not mean a loss--to the contrary, it means manifold enrichment of personality and experience. We are far greater than most of us realize and are willing to explore. Becoming one with others is never diminishing. Excellent read! Thank you.
Romios Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 8:50 PM
Thank you for your contemplative comments. You covered many ares in them. I so appreciate your time and input here, Joe. Panagiota God Bless you,
Onclaud Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 4:43 PM
fluent drift of thought, panagiota... very nice!...huggs
Romios Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 4:47 PM
Thank you, Nette, really appreciate your Sweet comment, Panagiota
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