My Lil Special Guest

It popped 
in as if to say 
hello
my birdie buddy all sweet and 
mellow
Dressed in a downy gold gown 
of yellow
I tried to cheep in tune, join its 
song to say
'welcome my chirping lil fellow 
Oh my it sang then like a 
feathered cello!

So Soupers hi and hello
and twitter tweet tweet
May you find this short 'n' 
sweet sweet
This was about my winged 
guest of honor
What shall I call her, Eileen O' 
Connor?
It's birdsong is my very favourite music
Nature 's natural melodies so harmonic 

(contest, 'sweetest touches of verse)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/11/2013 4:59:00 PM
Love it! Very sweet. Betty
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Date: 7/11/2013 12:47:00 PM
Love this sweet poem about your little yellow bird. My Mom's favorite song was 'Yellow Bird. SuZ
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Date: 7/7/2013 10:12:00 PM
Cute poem.
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Date: 7/4/2013 9:38:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem and had a laugh too. Nice fun poem with good rhyme, as Im from Ireland the names Eileen and O'Conner are very common, Eibhlin is the Irish Gaelic spelling of the name....(pronounced EVELIN.)
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Date: 6/28/2013 10:43:00 PM
Oh, yes, quite a fun poem to read!
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Date: 6/28/2013 6:57:00 AM
hahaha!Zaynub, u entertained me by your work...who were they? the names you mentioned, very intriguing piece...Loved it really, GOOD JOB! welcome to Psoup, thank you for the visit!...Elai
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Date: 6/27/2013 11:56:00 AM
love the rhyme pattern nice write thanks for coments on mine xxdavidscott
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Date: 6/27/2013 11:01:00 AM
how sweet this is.. you charm me.. gotta check eileen... inviting piece..:) huggs
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 6/28/2013 12:22:00 AM
Hi guys, i can't put my finger on where i heard dat name but it rhymed so i took it. I thought she was someone famous for i hav heard dat name often so i calld d canary bird after d name.:)
Date: 6/26/2013 10:21:00 PM
S. Zaynub, ha ha... your a wonderful guest dropping by... Is Eileen O Connor from the soup... a nice rhyme... xox~ LINDA
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