My Life Was Full of Gratitude and Love

medallion dreams now turned to grey,
wild flower scented sheets once laid
on the line held with clothesline wood pins,
now all I can do is hang on to that rope line
for dear life;
      (gripping goodbyes)

I sit at my sill inside the nook and
watch generational bonds form. 
I look at my hubby and say with pride,
     "look what we started, sweetheart..."

Sixty-five years of marriage with 
eons of photo frames lining the walls-
for he is my mate to my soul;
                              my line to my life. 

I've worn my heart on my sleeve
since the first time I gave my heart
away- 
        (high school sweethearts)
I was young,
fell in love too easily;
trusted blindly
but
it was worth every prick to my heart- 
every bloodstream that flowed with
pain. 

my skin untoned,
wrinkled with spots of age;
beautiful scars worn for years have
finally mended and healed-
for no longer am I scarred.

they say it time and time again....
but honestly-
no I don't wish I knew then what I 
know now.

for it is through growth I lived
a life completely full of affection.
I know what it's like to fall in love so
deep your toes curl,
I know what it's like to have two sisters
choose death over life-
I know how it feels to embrace
a daughter on the day she was born,
   and
I know how it feels to be loved so
unconditionally...
even the angels weep.

to be grateful is to have lived;
and that is what I shall die saying...
                            "blessed am I."
             (gripping life)         





Written: February 6, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 8/11/2019 12:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Lu Loo, with this moving poetry. It certainly paints a beautiful picture of gratitude.
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Date: 8/11/2019 5:08:00 PM
thank you my sweet lady :) -luloo
Date: 8/10/2019 10:12:00 PM
A loving write so we'll expressed. Congrats on your 1st place.
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Date: 8/11/2019 5:07:00 PM
thank you sweet lady :)-luloo
Date: 8/10/2019 7:38:00 PM
Your poem is a beautifully inspiring and an emotionally faceted beauty, Luloo. Your exceptional and expressive writing flows gracefully without hindrance. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/11/2019 5:07:00 PM
many thanks for saying such nice things, I imagined myself when I am married for 65 years. I hope to look back and read this and sigh because it came true.
Date: 8/10/2019 7:09:00 PM
I see why John gave you a first placement Luloo, for this poem so beautifully expresses how love can conquer all. Congratulations on your most deserving first placement. A Fave from me! I love this beauty! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/11/2019 5:06:00 PM
aww thank you lovely Connie, you are so sweet :)-luloo
Date: 8/10/2019 6:15:00 PM
This is wonderful writing Laura, can't believe this beauty never placed in a contest, but for me it is top notch, congrats on a shared number 1 win!!
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Date: 8/10/2019 6:45:00 PM
wow John, thank you so much :) I wrote this as if I was married for 65 years. I'll have to pull this poem out and read it when that day comes...I am honored for my placement :)-luloo
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