Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

My Life To the Tenth Degree

Living a life full of confusion
Just trying to figure it all out
Hope I can find some solution
To rid myself of all this doubt

Wanting to do it the right way
Yet it's a never ending battle
Matters not what they all say
Like my soul they try to rattle

I won't give in easily you see
In me there's much more fight
I live my life to the tenth degree
As I always shed a bright light

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Richard Lamoureux August 12, 2019 at 8:31 AM I like the metamorphosis at the end of this write. You do exude a positive light Brenda. Brenda Chiri August 12, 2019 at 11:13 AM Thank you Rick I do appreciate your kind words! Lol yes I suppose I do huh! Well had to love me before anyother! And I'm good!;)

Gordon Mcconnell August 12, 2019 at 3:05 AM Such a brilliant pen Brenda, great rhyme and flow. I love your final stanza so full of fighting courage, just what I needed to hear this day. Have a great day,Gordon Brenda Chiri August 12, 2019 at 11:12 AM Ah thanks Gordon!;) I am doing better than I have in years and loving life to the tenth degree!;)

John Fleming August 5, 2019 at 2:31 PM I recall hearing the phrase "the tenth degree"...must google afterwards and refresh my memory. I enjoyed this little write, Brenda. You know I favour a lot of your writing when it has that touch of feistiness attached to it...whatever the mood of the poem. Much affection! :) john Brenda Chiri August 5, 2019 at 4:48 PM Lol John as I have said you are my biggest supporter! And I want to thank you for that!;) all my affection!;)

Quoth Theraven August 4, 2019 at 3:18 PM Brenda, I like this poem. Keep fighting the good fight..,keep shining bright. -Richard Brenda Chiri August 5, 2019 at 4:47 PM Thank you once again! I am so happy you liked this one!;)

Tony Hargreaves August 3, 2019 at 2:02 PM Hi Brenda. Issues to resolve and much to think about. A lovely piece and in pleasing verse. Best wishes. Tony Brenda Chiri August 5, 2019 at 4:46 PM Ah thank you Tony you are too kind!;)