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My Life To the Tenth Degree

Living a life full of confusion Just trying to figure it all out Hope I can find some solution To rid myself of all this doubt Wanting to do it the right way Yet it's a never ending battle Matters not what they all say Like my soul they try to rattle I won't give in easily you see In me there's much more fight I live my life to the tenth degree As I always shed a bright light

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/12/2019 8:31:00 AM

I like the metamorphosis at the end of this write. You do exude a positive light Brenda.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/12/2019 11:13:00 AM

Thank you Rick I do appreciate your kind words! Lol yes I suppose I do huh! Well had to love me before anyother! And I'm good!;)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 8/12/2019 3:05:00 AM

Such a brilliant pen Brenda, great rhyme and flow. I love your final stanza so full of fighting courage, just what I needed to hear this day. Have a great day,Gordon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/12/2019 11:12:00 AM

Ah thanks Gordon!;) I am doing better than I have in years and loving life to the tenth degree!;)

John Fleming

Date: 8/5/2019 2:31:00 PM

I recall hearing the phrase "the tenth degree"...must google afterwards and refresh my memory. I enjoyed this little write, Brenda. You know I favour a lot of your writing when it has that touch of feistiness attached to it...whatever the mood of the poem. Much affection! :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/5/2019 4:48:00 PM

Lol John as I have said you are my biggest supporter! And I want to thank you for that!;) all my affection!;)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 8/4/2019 3:18:00 PM

Brenda, I like this poem. Keep fighting the good fight..,keep shining bright. -Richard

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/5/2019 4:47:00 PM

Thank you once again! I am so happy you liked this one!;)

Tony Hargreaves

Date: 8/3/2019 2:02:00 PM

Hi Brenda. Issues to resolve and much to think about. A lovely piece and in pleasing verse. Best wishes. Tony

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/5/2019 4:46:00 PM

Ah thank you Tony you are too kind!;)