My Life Story - Part 1

I grew up in a normal family,
A story told by different people,
with the same affinity.
Grew along with the same saying,
"The richer gets richer and the poor gets poorer".
Never did I care to look into the latter side,
Never did I weep for those impecunious.

All along I was enticed in the richness,
That never did I know I will fall below.
Then did I know what it felt like,
Being indigent, hungry, thirsty and in solitude.

A light of hope was sent from above,
I gained my strength to fight back,
Not to be enticed in the same richness,
But for those dwelling below just as I was.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
August 5, 2024 at 8:06 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 11:42 PM
danie, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A   Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 3:21 PM
enjoyed this one Allen, Luv p.d.
Danie Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 4:08 AM
Thank you for passing by p.d :) A~D
Pinet Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 3:53 PM
You held my interest in your story right to the end with superb imagery. Emile.
Danie Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 9:37 PM
Thank you Emile for your comment .Hoped you liked it :) A~D
Allison Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 4:24 AM
I'm looking forward to reading the next part of the story Allen - I particularly like the final stanza in your verse - and there definitely is more to life than money:-) hugs Jan xx
Danie Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 9:38 PM
Hoped you like it Jan. Next part will come soon :) A~D
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