My Life Partner

oh my life partner, if you are the wings then i am the flight
if you are the instrument then I am the sound of the instrument
if you are the song then I am the tone of the song
the shy eyes have been able to disclose
what the heart was too shy to communicate to yOu
You are the extreme limit of love
I am only the begining 
as far as my feelings concerned the limit is the sky
or the other limit is the earth- meaning what ever the issue
All the considerations come to end on you- yu are the main focus of my life
what ever it may be
You are beautiful- prettiest of all
But I am the pride of that beauty......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 20, 2013 at 9:49 PM
Vinayak, . Congratulations, thank you for the lovely entry. Goodnight. Luv~LINDA
Davis Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 10:45 PM
Your writings have so much passion and emotion. The reader gets pulled in and can feel your heart and soul from beginning to end. Nice job
Pratap Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 12:58 AM
Thank You Robin means a lot... ~V~
Swaminathan Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 11:47 PM
lucky is your wife, let this love be permanently so long as lived, a nice write also enjoyed
Pratap Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 2:10 AM
M still a degree student actually...its dedicated to my girlfriend actually ~V~
Duncan Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 6:32 PM
Nicely expressed feeling of love and devotion ;}
Pratap Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 2:11 AM
thnk u Debbie
Carroll Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 10:23 PM
Hi Vinayak, Nice expression of affection here.. Ken..
Danie Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 10:23 PM
True to being a life partner... :)A~D
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