My Life Is On the Line On Your Life

My life is on the line on your life 

My life is on the line on your life
Your life is on the line on my life
If you die I die too
If I die You will die too
For we can both live we need to live
our Lives together and happy forever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Campi Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 3:38 PM
i am quite taken with your name. is it your pen name? or really you. The poem "My life is on the line on your life" It quite romantic and shows a touching love for another. Take care and keep writing, Jancarl
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July 12, 2011 at 12:24 AM
Is your real name possible? I like it--Mission possible! Poet Possible! Possible Poet?
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