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My Life Is On the Line On Your Life

My life is on the line on your life My life is on the line on your life Your life is on the line on my life If you die I die too If I die You will die too For we can both live we need to live our Lives together and happy forever

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Jancarl Campi

Date: 7/18/2011 3:38:00 PM

i am quite taken with your name. is it your pen name? or really you. The poem "My life is on the line on your life" It quite romantic and shows a touching love for another. Take care and keep writing, Jancarl

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/12/2011 12:24:00 AM

Is your real name possible? I like it--Mission possible! Poet Possible! Possible Poet?