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My Life Is Gone

My life is done and no longer fun When I'm here I have no time to spare I have no fear and I am ready to disappear No one will miss me when I am gone The gun will ring one time and I'll be done The fear of no one loving me isn't fair Me disappearing is the time they will care Today my family will lose their son The fear of my family in the same pain as me Me dying is the new awakening of joy Even though it's the end of my road I can't bear what hell will do to me But let them destroy my lifeless body Please just don't let my body be shown at the end of the road Authors Note: Please don't commit suicide Call the National Suicide Prevention Lifeline 1-800-273-8255

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/26/2017 12:34:00 AM
What Daniel said :) But the message is a good one. Welcome to PoetrySoup
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Chris Richardson
Date: 5/26/2017 11:05:00 AM
Thank You so much I am a 10th grader in high school just here to learn
Date: 5/25/2017 8:12:00 PM
A very good poem, Chris. I don't see many Italian sonnets here in the soup. I won't pick you apart because they can be a little difficult but kudos for trying:) I love the content but your form is just a tad off.
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Chris Richardson
Date: 5/26/2017 11:05:00 AM
Thank You so much I am a 10th grader in high school just here to learn

Book: Shattered Sighs