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My Life a Double Exposure

I found an old kept memory Overlapping one I made today A double sided fixed reverie Simple times to me now in decay Once the life of my cherished youth Now only a picturesque causeway Similar now my days, in truth As I see a bit of double exposure Still a hippy with a dash of vermouth Only now I’m better at keeping my composure Without revealing a full-on grainy disclosure
written 5-18-2020 Double Exposure contest 2nd premium Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 5/25/2020 11:09:00 AM
Lovely rhyme scheme--from one hippy [well, ex-hippy] to another, congrasts on your win!
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Date: 5/25/2020 3:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 5/24/2020 2:25:00 PM
Back with congratulations Jeanne! :))) xomo!
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Date: 5/24/2020 6:29:00 AM
"a double sided fixed reverie"....seems so picturesque. Congratulations on your win Jeanne :)
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Date: 5/18/2020 7:41:00 PM
This is awesome Jeanne! I especially love the line "Still a hippy with a dash of vermouth". My best to you in the contest, xomo!
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 5/18/2020 9:13:00 PM
My favorite line too! gracias.
Date: 5/18/2020 4:59:00 PM
Nicely done, Jeanne!
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 5/18/2020 6:52:00 PM
:)

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