Jeanne Mcgee Poet Terza Rima

My Life a Double Exposure

I found an old kept memory
Overlapping one I made today
A double sided fixed reverie

Simple times to me now in decay
Once the life of my cherished youth
Now only a picturesque causeway

Similar now my days, in truth
As I see a bit of double exposure
Still a hippy with a dash of vermouth

Only now I’m better at keeping my composure
Without revealing a full-on grainy disclosure


written 5-18-2020
Double Exposure contest   2nd premium
Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann

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L. J. Carber May 25, 2020 at 11:09 AM Lovely rhyme scheme--from one hippy [well, ex-hippy] to another, congrasts on your win!

Kai Michael Neumann May 25, 2020 at 3:38 AM Congratulations on your win. Beautiful. Kind wishes, Kai

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 24, 2020 at 2:25 PM Back with congratulations Jeanne! :))) xomo!

Aditi Mishra May 24, 2020 at 6:29 AM "a double sided fixed reverie"....seems so picturesque. Congratulations on your win Jeanne :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 18, 2020 at 7:41 PM This is awesome Jeanne! I especially love the line "Still a hippy with a dash of vermouth". My best to you in the contest, xomo! Jeanne Mcgee May 18, 2020 at 9:13 PM My favorite line too! gracias.

Kim Rodrigues May 18, 2020 at 4:59 PM Nicely done, Jeanne! Jeanne Mcgee May 18, 2020 at 6:52 PM :)