My Life

A span of emptiness and nothing else
                  Boundless like the sky
     Not far in the past and for considerable time
      Life was like a garden, roses and eglantine

            This desert has not even a mirage.
     I am like a grain grinded between two parts
                Of stones of sky and earth
         High like a mountain, insurmountable

           Sucked me even of power to think
           Prohibited for me like a hard drink
     The memories of the past may bring solace
  My old album, an escape from life, frozen in time.
                                ---

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/14/2016 9:29:00 PM
I REALLY LIKE THIS VERY MUCH... LOVE SKAT
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Hamida Yamin
Date: 2/8/2016 6:54:00 AM
THANKS FOR VISITING MY Poem SKAT AND FOR YOUR APPRECIATION
Date: 2/7/2015 1:06:00 PM
May your new pictures be infused with joy love and sunshine!
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Hamida Yamin
Date: 2/15/2015 1:47:00 AM
Thank s for your kind comments on my poem My Life. Regards.
Date: 1/28/2015 8:03:00 AM
oh! What agreat, great and lovely poem. I hope the new year if going on well,. Hoping to visit more of your pages
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Hamida Yamin
Date: 1/28/2015 2:16:00 PM
Thanks for visiting my poem Life and for your nice comments.
Date: 1/19/2015 11:44:00 PM
oh my gosh, sounds so sad! You really show that emotion with your imagery. This is great writing. I hope you have many more for us!! Wish I were not in such a hurry and I 'd read your other few. Thanks for reading mine today. luv, Andrea
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Hamida Yamin
Date: 1/20/2015 1:04:00 PM
Thanks for your kind and uplifting comment, Andrea. I wish you to read more of my poems and favor me with your opinion. Love -Hamida
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