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My Life

My life is like the sea waves, That rise and fall continuously, My life is like the sea waves, That come to play with me, My life is like the sea waves, In whom I drown my sorrows, My life is like the sea waves, That live each day for a better tomorrow, My life is like the sea waves, That come again and again to see me, Just to tell me that, There are many things to come, And that I should not feel down, For this is all just a drop in the sea!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2015 10:36:00 PM

SHARMILA, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA

Skat A

Date: 10/7/2014 11:39:00 AM

Sharmila, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Sharmila Shankar
Date: 10/8/2014 12:50:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to read my poem. :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/2/2014 2:53:00 AM

I love what the sea can bring to a person.Powerful is the sea and beautiful this poem.Welcome to poetrysoup-Charma

Sharmila Shankar
Date: 10/2/2014 2:58:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely comments. Sharmila

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/2/2014 2:04:00 AM

powerful piece of writing it will break like a wave excellent pen

Sharmila Shankar
Date: 10/2/2014 3:02:00 AM

Thank you for your supportive words. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/30/2014 9:17:00 AM

Sharmila,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Sharmila Shankar
Date: 10/2/2014 3:00:00 AM

Thank you for your support and encouragement. :) Sharmila

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/30/2014 4:55:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Sharmila- I choose your first very well written poem - I like it a lot :) - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sharmila Shankar
Date: 10/2/2014 2:59:00 AM

Thank you for your wonderful comments. :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/26/2014 8:03:00 PM

Brilliant poem, I almost felt sea sick. Congratulations on your HM

Sharmila Shankar
Date: 9/27/2014 10:54:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely comments. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2014 6:34:00 PM

love the repeated line especially as i am constantly surrounded by the sea on our little Island - congrats on your Hm:-) hugs jan xxx

Sharmila Shankar
Date: 9/27/2014 10:55:00 AM

Thank you for taking time to go through my poem and enjoying it. Hugs Shasha. :)