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My Life

My life is like a pencil 
Sharp and use 
Once the work is done 
Kept in box like tube 

My life is like polythene 
People use it and throw 
Once i carry their load 
They feel air and blow..!!  

My life is becoming a dustbin 
All come and throw garbage 
Between my life and relation 
There are only ashes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/9/2014 1:33:00 PM
wonderful expression here my friend! Life does have it ups and downs, chose to move past the downs with joy of learning and learn to cherish the ups for they are what make life worth living. keep up the good work!!
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Date: 7/26/2014 11:06:00 AM
Sometimes life seems like that Bohari but then the mist clears and we can see a new dawn. Good write my friend. God Bless. Dave.
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