My Life

First off free Montell and my mans 
Tev too, In a minute my mans 
Torrieyain will be home soon, Dang I 
feel like they locked up my whole 
crew, I'm surprise they didn't lock me 
up too, I remember seeing my cuz on 
the local news, that wasn't cool, yea 
we use to do the fool, we was close 
at school, we was bro at home, he 
put the nine to his dad's dome, I ddnt 
mean to make this sound like a sad 
song but its crazy how the team 
gone and I feel like im in it alone I 
aint gone lie life feel wrong at times , 
dats why I try to commit no crimes 
and jus write dese rhymes for I wont 
hav to worry bout dying or making 
my mama cry, West Virginia the 
Hometown, Detroit the home now 
,seem how anywhere you live there's 
a ghetto dats why u gotta keep ur 
head tho
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 6, 2016 at 11:15 PM
Demetrius Curton, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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April 29, 2016 at 10:35 PM
Demetrius, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Love -LINDA-
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