My Life

I used to think of my life as a fairy tale,
The sun was always shining,
Flowers were always blooming,
Not a day that it rained in my life.

Suddenly it all changed,
Now it rains everyday,
And the sun doesn’t shine,
Flowers keep dying,
And I keep crying.

My life is a shambles,
There’s no one to turn to,
Can someone please help me?
I’m falling to pieces,
And my life officially sucks.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 3:40 PM
Oh my Tracey, well your poetry is very good, what a great foundation to work on, i enjoyed this write>>James
Joseph Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 10:40 AM
Read "resiliance" by Elizabeth Edwards.
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