My Last Love

My last love wasn’t sent from above but above my head he’ll stay while I weep every day. My heart and his weren’t meant to be together although he holds mine in a tether. I’d tear out my hair if I thought he’d care but I just brush it all away though in my hair he’ll stay. Too young for an old soul like me neither here nor there, it’s all up in the air. I’ll dream of him again tonight when my soul takes flight to Oz where I’ll spend the night. Oz, Where the moon is high and lights the way across an ocean of gray. Where my last love lives and breathes and never leaves. By: Carole O’Terry Duet Copyright: 11/17/2018 “All Rights Reserved”
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Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 8:22 PM
this is sad but very dreamy. Loved your imagery, dear.
Duet Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 10:52 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. It is one of my personal favorites. Carole
Warrior Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 10:57 AM
Lovely write my friend...a sad tale...loved the music too...love & light...^WW^
Duet Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 1:41 PM
Thank you ^WW^. I appreciate your comment. Carole :D
Green Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 8:43 AM
This was beautiful Carole, a little sad but beautiful.
Duet Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 1:42 PM
Thanks, Chris. Your comment is appreciated. Carole :D
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 2:33 PM
Love the way you wrote this one, Carole!
Duet Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Thank you, Kim. I just wish I knew what "form" it is...if there is a "form" like this. Carole :D
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