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My Last Goodbye To You...

Please believe me Please leave me be Your words now grating... skips on scratched CD Crying wont help you now The rumors all drown out the sound Those tears dont sell me, oh Croctilian One! Just more games.... so silly and fun... You're from a land where emotions flip like switches Revenge is this dinner Ive served.... all cold dishes A slamming door for dessert...no "best wishes" Please believe me....Please leave me be Its all sickness, Ive found medication Im on to new things, no hestitation Waving back smiling "Bye now lover"!! Glad I've cured this illness of her...on now to discover those sweet ones I once shunned for you There's no "feeling blue" Hallmark card this time Only a tattered, burning Valentine ...message too charred to read

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/28/2009 3:24:00 PM
This is beautiful steve, I love the line 'Its all sickness, Ive found medication, Im on to new things, no hesitation'.. Love brings such traumatic times in our life, can anyone ever be happy in love...
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Date: 1/8/2009 5:14:00 PM
I can identify with this Steve, "sweet ones I once shunned for you," I can let myself so involved in a relationship I close everything else out. Great writing Alfie. Laurie
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