My Last Farewell

At the end of the tunnel
there is no light for me.
I can't go anywehre,
it's too dark to see.
I wish i was not
defined as weak.
I don't need sympathy,
nor any critique
I gave up my hopes
I gave up my dream,
down on my face
tears always stream.
I can not help myself
and no one can.
It is just another day 
that I pretend
that my heart will someday
and somehow mend.
But this is an illusion
and illusion hurts
I want to clean myself
from all the dirt.
So the time has come
to ring my last bell
The time has come
to say my last farewell..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/26/2016 10:23:00 AM
Awesome description, Victoria. Love this verse. Linda
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Date: 11/18/2015 7:45:00 AM
Greetings Victoria. Congrats for your awesome WIN in the contest! ;-)
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 11/18/2015 10:58:00 AM
Thank you, I appreciate it :3 Lots of love xxx
Date: 11/16/2015 9:18:00 PM
Hi Victoria, congratulations. SKAT
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 11/17/2015 4:46:00 AM
Thank you, dear xxx
Date: 11/16/2015 9:48:00 AM
Congrats Victoria! Last 4 lines are compelling!
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 11/16/2015 11:12:00 AM
Thank youu :333333 xxxxxxx
Date: 11/16/2015 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations Victoria
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 11/16/2015 11:12:00 AM
Thank you, dear xxxxxx So happy
Date: 1/3/2015 1:12:00 PM
deep excellent pen victoria i pray chrismas and new year went well for you bless you
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Date: 12/20/2014 6:28:00 PM
this is so deep and sad - i can relate to this as my sister suffers from depression - hope the dark clouds lift and you have brighter days ahead:-) Hugs jan xx
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 12/21/2014 1:33:00 AM
Thank you..hugs:)
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