My Last Farewell

At the end of the tunnel
there is no light for me.
I can't go anywehre,
it's too dark to see.
I wish i was not
defined as weak.
I don't need sympathy,
nor any critique
I gave up my hopes
I gave up my dream,
down on my face
tears always stream.
I can not help myself
and no one can.
It is just another day 
that I pretend
that my heart will someday
and somehow mend.
But this is an illusion
and illusion hurts
I want to clean myself
from all the dirt.
So the time has come
to ring my last bell
The time has come
to say my last farewell..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 26, 2016 at 10:23 AM
Awesome description, Victoria. Love this verse. Linda
Kimathi Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 7:45 AM
Greetings Victoria. Congrats for your awesome WIN in the contest! ;-)
Georgieva Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 10:58 AM
Thank you, I appreciate it :3 Lots of love xxx
A  Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 9:18 PM
Hi Victoria, congratulations. SKAT
Georgieva Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 4:46 AM
Thank you, dear xxx
Cheema Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 9:48 AM
Congrats Victoria! Last 4 lines are compelling!
Georgieva Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 11:12 AM
Thank youu :333333 xxxxxxx
Negron Flores Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 8:19 AM
Congratulations Victoria
Georgieva Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 11:12 AM
Thank you, dear xxxxxx So happy
Mcdaid Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 1:12 PM
deep excellent pen victoria i pray chrismas and new year went well for you bless you
Allison Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 6:28 PM
this is so deep and sad - i can relate to this as my sister suffers from depression - hope the dark clouds lift and you have brighter days ahead:-) Hugs jan xx
Georgieva Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 1:33 AM
Thank you..hugs:)
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