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My Laptop

This laptop kills my time I cannot breathe without it Staring at it but never really doing anything The light doesn't help her sleep But I wont be long I repeat in the darkness So many sights and sounds to see You cant take my soul away from me And what would i do without it Read a book

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/12/2014 4:59:00 AM
The Globe has saved more time when we had only laps but tops.We can use the savings now!nice.Regards dear poet Ben. -Safa
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Date: 12/12/2014 1:30:00 AM
I know what you mean can relate to it. lol.. Excellent pen Ben! A 7 for you! Truly enjoyed it dear friend. :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Ben Brennan
Date: 12/12/2014 5:46:00 AM
Appreciate the feedback, thanks a lot.

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