My Laptop

This laptop kills my time
I cannot breathe without it
Staring at it but never really doing anything
The light doesn't help her sleep
But I wont be long I repeat in the darkness
So many sights and sounds to see
You cant take my soul away from me
And what would i do without it
Read a book
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Thajudeen Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 4:59 AM
The Globe has saved more time when we had only laps but tops.We can use the savings now!nice.Regards dear poet Ben. -Safa
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 1:30 AM
I know what you mean can relate to it. lol.. Excellent pen Ben! A 7 for you! Truly enjoyed it dear friend. :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
Brennan Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 5:46 AM
Appreciate the feedback, thanks a lot.
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