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I feel my life decaying, the end is not that far; I treasure moments- a bird song, raindrops, my soft cat, my friends, family, I love snow falling in the woods; my adieu but a soft word, a whisper drifting. _____________________________ September 2, 2019 Poetry/Yalto/Verse/My Lament Copyright Protected, ID 19-1177-768-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Yalto Poems Only sponsor, Emile Pinet Fourth Place

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Date: 6/4/2020 10:08:00 PM
I commented on this lovely moving Yalto Constance. It is very beautiful. My comment disappeared. That happens too often. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 10/1/2019 4:01:00 PM
yours is certainly one of the best...it is really tough to create a mood with this form and you did wonderfully :)
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Date: 10/1/2019 7:39:00 PM
David, thank you so much for that beautiful comment, it means a lot to me !
Date: 10/1/2019 11:39:00 AM
softly beautifully sad... especially like the last line. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/1/2019 1:18:00 PM
PS, thank you for the comment and the congratulations, appreciate !
Date: 9/30/2019 6:50:00 PM
a beautifully poetic poem and flows in yalto. Congratulations on this top win.
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Date: 10/1/2019 12:39:00 AM
Jeanne thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations !
Date: 9/30/2019 12:54:00 PM
Back with congrats on a deserving win, Constance!:-)
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Date: 9/30/2019 4:56:00 PM
Edward thanks for the congrats and the compliment !
Date: 9/30/2019 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations Constance, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 9/30/2019 10:45:00 AM
Emile, thank you so much for another inspiring contest and for my great placement, yes, judging is never easy especially in a premiere contest.
Date: 9/19/2019 10:08:00 PM
Wonderful Yalto, Constance:-) Loved it. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 9/19/2019 10:36:00 PM
Edward thanks for visiting with the wonderful and the love
Date: 9/2/2019 1:10:00 PM
Do you feel the end is near...I love the way you mentioned...the soft touch of your cat so dear
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Date: 9/2/2019 4:47:00 PM
Arturo, I have lots of health problems and doubt I will live to be an old lady, when the end comes, and who knows when I am ready. I have learned in my life I do not need big things .. I need simple things like a soft cat.. thanks for visiting ~
Date: 9/2/2019 10:19:00 AM
Treasure moments is the best way live, always...nicely penned.
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Date: 9/2/2019 4:44:00 PM
Jeanne, thanks for visiting and for commenting ~