My Kite

. my k | k i | i t | t e ____________e f | f l | l i | i e e s s h i g h i n t h e s k y + + + Just fooling around

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Pinaki Ranjan Mukherjee

Date: 3/11/2014 4:20:00 PM

haha...I like this. good.

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/22/2012 12:08:00 PM

Oh! lovely image of kite. I am remembering my childhood life from your wonderful poem. Loved................., always bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/22/2012 7:07:00 AM

very nice Sara.. I cannot do shape poems but so enjoyed this one my friend.. best wishes if u enter it in craig's contest..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/21/2012 4:50:00 PM

well, I sure like it. I have so little imagination, all I could come up with was the standard diamond shape!

Jack Horne

Date: 7/21/2012 11:25:00 AM

love this jolly piece, my friend. I've never attempted one of these before and really must!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/21/2012 8:37:00 AM

wow, sara.. the visual is delightful.. this can be a monoku if i'm right!... very creative; i'm trying to do a shape and it's really hard.. you make it look so easy!... winning huggs! :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/20/2012 7:56:00 PM

Cute idea, Sara. Love, Kim

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/20/2012 5:44:00 PM

This is a very clever write my friend! I really did enjoy the craftiness of your engineering for this poem! Looks great! Awesome Work!!