My Kite

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Just fooling around
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mukherjee Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 4:20 PM
haha...I like this. good.
Devnath  Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 12:08 PM
Oh! lovely image of kite. I am remembering my childhood life from your wonderful poem. Loved................., always bl
Sweetheart Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 7:07 AM
very nice Sara.. I cannot do shape poems but so enjoyed this one my friend.. best wishes if u enter it in craig's contest..
Dietrich Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 4:50 PM
well, I sure like it. I have so little imagination, all I could come up with was the standard diamond shape!
Horne Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 11:25 AM
love this jolly piece, my friend. I've never attempted one of these before and really must!
Onclaud Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 8:37 AM
wow, sara.. the visual is delightful.. this can be a monoku if i'm right!... very creative; i'm trying to do a shape and it's really hard.. you make it look so easy!... winning huggs! :)
Merryman Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 7:56 PM
Cute idea, Sara. Love, Kim
Sivey Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 5:44 PM
This is a very clever write my friend! I really did enjoy the craftiness of your engineering for this poem! Looks great! Awesome Work!!
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