Shreyas Susan Poet Free verse

My Kiss From Heaven

When i first met you and you walked past me
it was love at first sight
When we met again i thought you are mine
When you proposed me in the crowded corridors
all i could do was blush and blush
And when you took my lips as your possesion
all i could do was drown in the passion
As you and i luxuriously explored the grooves in each ones lips ....
And now, when i kissed you
all i could feel was the numbness of your lips
the unresponsiveness shattering me
casting a shroud on our million dreams...
All i could do was to wish that i was born earlier..
so that i could live with you longer
The lid of the coffin closed burrying the memories of my first and last kiss together....

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Skat A December 31, 2015 at 9:26 PM so sweet

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri August 7, 2013 at 3:10 AM Oh no such a sadening poem, is it fictional? Whateva it is its splendid lovely! Pls read my latest poem too.:)

Danesh Morgan July 30, 2013 at 12:04 AM what a tragic poem, a kiss gone cold, a heart long gone, but memories still lingers. touching

Cherie Thomas July 28, 2013 at 8:42 AM Wow,,,,, this is a true tear jearker I thought the numbness of your lips, meant the relationship had, failed never thought it was death....very touching & sad, very unique write shreyas...I do enjoy your poetry. Thankyou4sharing:) peace & blessings cherie....

Alfonce Choi July 26, 2013 at 3:40 AM Hi Susy! Why did you have to end it that sad? I love your poem, it is very emotional all through. It explores all the feelings of any reader. Sorry Susy if really this happened - My friend Neelam just tried to convince me this morning that we most times write about circumstances we have been in, I pray this is not the case here. Great Susy!

Poet Tacito July 24, 2013 at 8:44 AM I didn't expect this kind of ending. This threw me for a loop and held onto my heartstrings very deeply. Excellent job!