My Kind of Day

It is a stand outside and shout “whee” kind of day The sun is brightly shining, the squirrels out to play, The smell of freshly mown grass plays with the breeze I can measure the happiness by the leaves in the trees. The birds are twittering and excitedly flying about, They don’t seem to care I yelled an ear-splitting shout, My gossipy neighbor has nothing nefarious to chide So, all in all, it is an “up, up and away” day outside.
FIRST PLACE WINNER Written June 28, 2021 for Brian Strand's Couplet Contest
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Kauffman Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 10:56 AM
Milt, this poem is like a happy pinwheel spinning with delight! I really like that nothing, not even your neighbor, is going to steal your "whee" joy. Dolly Parton once said: "Don't let nobody steal your joy." Wonderfully expressed! Congrats and high fives for your win!
Hankins Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 11:29 AM
Sam, thank you so much. Dolly was right!
Merryman Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 9:48 AM
Delightful and uplifting! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
Hankins Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 10:03 AM
Thanks, Kim. Your comment is so thoughtful.
Alex Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 4:24 AM
A beautifully created couplet. Congratulations on your win!
Hankins Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 8:10 AM
Thanks so much, Christuraj, for your thoughtful comment.
Seeker Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 7:41 PM
Soaring spirits! Congrats on your win, Milton!
Hankins Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 9:59 PM
Thanks, Unseeking Seeker. I appreciate it.
Krutsinger Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 11:23 PM
No disappointment in this line "My gossipy neighbor has nothing nefarious to chide" Smile. Snicker. Smirk.
Hankins Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 10:00 PM
LOL. I sort of like it myself. Thanks!
Hawkins Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 1:28 AM
Whooosh! Beautiful feeling, Wonderful Day. What could be lovelier than that...
Hankins Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 8:24 AM
Thank you so much, Shirley, for your thoughtful compliments.
Faulkner Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 1:33 PM
This feels so fun and delightful, really like the line on measuring happiness by the leaves, and the 'gossipy neighbor' was an amusing surprise too!
Hankins Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 2:25 PM
Thanks so much for your visit and for your kind comment.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 11:42 AM
What an uplifting writing! Joyous and inspiring /, my dearest friend, L MILTON. The smile your poem designed on my lips becomes broader as time passes by. Blessings!
Hankins Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 11:56 AM
Thanks so much, Demetrios. I hope you are having exactly that kind of a day, friend.
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