My Joy

my little little girl you fill my world with rainbows and ponies having you around making your sounds sooths my soul and comforts me you play with your toys with so little noise i have to look around thank God your still there your my every care by you i am spellbound (For Erleena, Ashley, Yasmin and my baby sister)

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/30/2011 5:14:00 AM

excellent...love to look at the world through the eyes of a beautiful child. They all are and have the ability to grab your heart

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/16/2011 8:04:00 AM

A beautiful tribute of the joy in your life ;)

Stacey Watts

Date: 1/14/2011 9:03:00 PM

This is so very sweet. Such a very precious write about the children in your life. Thank you as well for your kind comment.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/7/2011 3:27:00 PM

I love the way you describe these children. They can bring so much joy to our lives, T.S., though I was not blessed with them. To answer your question, I was born and raised Catholic although I consider myself more spiritual than religious. I do believe we see our loved ones again on the other side. Thanks for your comments. I smiled the entire time I read this lovely poem. Love, Carolyn