Eve Roper Poet Rhyme

My Journey Doesn'T End

"My existence journey doesn't end;
               it's just a beginning to mend."
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Timeless conventional journey,
Through a window that returns me;
While a curtain of dreams is drawn. 
As blessed daylight comes in a yawn, 

Forward motion of flourish love, 
As favorable seasons shove
Yesterday back, while resolving 
My life, a means of evolving.



3/22/2022


Form J - Just Write Me A New Poem Poetry Contest   3.  journey
Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Constance La France March 26, 2022 at 6:53 PM Eve, congratulations on your win in my Just Write Me A Poem contest, wonderful and I like your quote too ~Constance

Paula Goldsmith March 25, 2022 at 9:35 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write/quote. Love Both. Have a great/blessed day....................

Christuraj Alex March 24, 2022 at 9:50 PM "My life, a means of evolving" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Gershon Wolf March 24, 2022 at 6:25 PM Eve, I love, love, love that quote! Bravo! ~ On the Mend Eve Roper March 24, 2022 at 7:04 PM Awe, thank you.

Susan Ashley March 23, 2022 at 11:17 AM Your poem is just so deep and beautiful, Eve. Indeed, your last insightful line is potent and a grand finale to an exquisite, expressive rhyme. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan Eve Roper March 24, 2022 at 7:05 PM You are so inspiring, my friend, thank you. Blessings

Andrea Dietrich March 22, 2022 at 9:44 PM You know, it's actually very close to being that J form that we could use if we wanted to. Jeuju or whatever it's called. Very nicely done, Eve. Eve Roper March 22, 2022 at 9:48 PM I looked up the form and it is 5 or 7 syllable count couplets for Jeuju.

Rico Leffanta March 22, 2022 at 11:55 AM Evolving is always better than rotting! Aloha!

L Milton Hankins March 22, 2022 at 9:14 AM Excellent, Eve. Absolutely excellent. And so true..... Eve Roper March 24, 2022 at 7:05 PM You are so inspiring, Milt, thank you. Blessings

Victor Buhagiar March 22, 2022 at 2:04 AM No our journey does not stop. Enjoyed your poem. Eve Roper March 24, 2022 at 7:06 PM My friend, thank you. Blessings