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My Jounry

walking down a path .going down and over mountions and vallies of every kind .throw villages and cities of every type.around an about every kind of river.studying very hard. writing about on a little notepad. on my way i can ribe a black and white horse running throw the dark green and forest with monsters and crichers of any breed. my horse will go throw waters up to 1000000000 foot long oceans.with sae monsters and big fish.even tthow i am own liiike 10 years old i can really do things like that. my jounry will be fun any even thow it will be dangers and sacry but very fun just to find nothiing but natures beatiy.

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Date: 4/28/2010 8:10:00 AM
very nice congrats on your win faleshia
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Date: 4/26/2010 2:01:00 PM
Yes the god of mischief Matt has struck again enjoy writing! enjoy learning...Light & Love
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Date: 4/26/2010 12:13:00 PM
Congratulation, I like the journey you took, but the spelling and grammar needs lots and lots of work. Keep writing, Kayla, and try to improve on the presentation and you will win many contest. I think you have a great talent, and a wonderful future as a poet and writer.. love constance
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Date: 4/25/2010 9:56:00 PM
Congrats Kayla on your 1st place win in Matt's contest.. great adventurous journey..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/16/2010 9:43:00 PM
A fine nARRATIVE POEM i ENJOYED IT
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