My Island Persuasion

Palm trees in silhouette, deep purple sunset
                                 tickle the moon of an indigo sky
Whispers of love seem to float on a pillow
           made by the clouds as they’re waving goodbye 

Birds of the night in their island persuasion
                          hint of a tune that we knew long ago
Sand dunes that temper the mist of the ocean
                            cradle our evening as I love you so

When you and I are alone with the stars
             time can stand still, may this night never end
Something keeps calling, I don’t want to answer
                   rather, I’ll stay and let sleep by my friend  

Yawning, I wake to the promise of coffee
                         only a dream was my island with you
Then as you lean in to kiss me good morning
              I know that all of my dreams have come true
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Calasibetta Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 10:37 AM
Happy Valentine's Day Mike~your poem is quite enchanting....and I am happy to know it was a dream come true! :)Paulette
Gentile Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 5:18 AM
Happy Valentine's day! Thanks so much Paulette xxoo
Y. Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 7:24 AM
Hi Mike, I really enjoyed reading your write this fine morning. I found it to be very romantic. Good ending as well. Happy Valentine’s Day- Alexis
Gentile Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 5:19 AM
Thank you Alexis xxoo Happy Valentine's Day!
Wolf Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 8:56 PM
Great double-take there in that last stanza, Mike! So 'well-done.' A 'rare' treat. ~ Wordplay Willie (Seriously, Mike: The poem is superb! ~ gw)
Gentile Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 9:47 PM
Thanks so much GW!!
Hawkins Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 8:39 PM
How lovely to read a romantic poem that is so sincere and tender. I especially liked the last four lines. Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry. Happy valentines day to you and your partner. Take care. Shirley
Gentile Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 9:46 PM
Thanks Shirley for your kind words xxoo
Messina Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 8:49 AM
Such a fab romantic write, Mike. Right in tune for the big V-day.
Gentile Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 9:24 AM
Yes, it's almost here! Thanks Charlie!!
Cunningham Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 8:39 AM
Oozing with romance Mike, perfect for valentines day. Hope your enjoying your weekend.. Tom
Gentile Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 9:23 AM
I am feeling rather romantic! Thanks Tom!!
Sands Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 6:32 AM
This is so special. Beautifully written Mike and peaceful too :)
Gentile Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 9:23 AM
Thanks so much Heidi xxoo
Pandit Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 5:39 AM
A wonderfully romantic poem Mike. Isn't it a bundle of joy when dreams come true!
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