Jan Allison Poet Lyric

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My Island Girl

Island girl
I've got my eyes on you
Loving the way you move
So smooth
Longing for your hand
My song
Take me to your wonderland
Come on
Cause together, island girl
Just us two...
We can groove 

Yeah, you don't know 
What you've been missing
But when I catch you girl
We'll be all night kissing
And feeling those waves 
Going deep sea fishing
Making love

Island girl
Show up in all my dreams
Sweet island girl
Your heat, turning me to steam
To gaze on you, so nice
To hold you.. I'll bring the ice
Oh, the sound of tropical tunes
Under the stars, it's a lover's moon
Can't resist.. I'm coming soon
Upon your shore
My island girl

Yeah, you don't know 
What you've been missing
But when I catch you girl
We'll be all night kissing
And feeling those waves 
Going deep sea fishing
Making love

I can't resist.. I'm coming soon
Upon your shore
You're all I want and more

Yeah, you don't know 
What you've been missing
But when I catch you girl
We'll be all night kissing
And feeling those waves 
Going deep sea fishing
Making love to you...
Island girl

~Written as a Collaboration for Duets: I Shall Collaborate With You Poetry Contest sponsored by James Edward Lee Sr

6/21/18

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Eve Roper July 30, 2018 at 11:05 AM Big congratulations on your collaborating win with Lyric Man ,Jan, nicely done. Hugs Eve Eve Roper July 30, 2018 at 10:13 PM I was wondering if anyone would notice the end result. I posted on Greg's poem of my opinion on the contest. If you don't give both recognition one is going to loose out. As being a collaboration both need to be recognized. I see why my partner was upset.. Jan Allison July 30, 2018 at 11:25 AM I got an N/A Eve which is so so unfair - I see Andrea got a 1st yet her writing partner got a 3rd another poem had both names on it yet still got a first. I just don't understand how a collaboration contest can be judged so bizarrely:-( hugs jan xx

Lin Lane June 23, 2018 at 8:16 AM Deep sea fishing, huh? A likely excuse for a rendezvous. lol nicely written. Jan Allison July 30, 2018 at 11:26 AM Thanks Lin sorry I'd not replied sooner, now I am reeling from the judging process!:-( hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. June 21, 2018 at 9:40 PM Hi Jan, I saw this on Lyric's page. This is hot steamy. You guys make good music together. I enjoyed it very much. I am so glad he's back:-) Alexis Jan Allison July 30, 2018 at 11:27 AM It was a joy to write with him, I sent him my lines and he wove them into this gem:-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit June 21, 2018 at 5:21 PM Enjoyed reading this upbeat, happy poem..a wonderful collaboration of two great minds..Kudos, Jan and Lyric Man. Jan Allison July 30, 2018 at 11:26 AM Thanks Vijay:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer June 21, 2018 at 3:47 PM it's funny, jan, when i started reading this poem i thought, "wow, this sounds a lot like something dave (lyric man) would write! the note at the end made me smile to learn that i was right. kudos to both of you for this delightful write... Jan Allison June 21, 2018 at 3:48 PM I sent my lines to LM and he wove this awesome poem around my idea:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues June 21, 2018 at 3:35 PM Love this! A beauty, Jan! Jan Allison June 21, 2018 at 3:47 PM Thanks Kim, I wrote several poems in the past with Dave, he is a fabulous writer and I'm so so glad he is back on soup:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith June 21, 2018 at 2:17 PM Wow how great...a Lyric Man sighting too. Jan Allison June 21, 2018 at 2:20 PM Yes he's back, and HOPEFULLY this time its for good Tim... Cas has also posted recently, all we need is for Darren Watson to come back ... that would be a dream come true for us all to be reunited on soup again:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham June 21, 2018 at 9:42 AM wow , this is absolute gold Jan, a brilliant collaboration, hats off to you both.Tom Jan Allison June 21, 2018 at 9:46 AM I sent Dave some lines and he wove them into this awesome poem, I don't think he's one for entering contests anymore so will have to see if anyone is interested in collaborating with me if it doesn't get entered into the contest:-) hugs Jan xx