My Inspiration

When in the calmly glaring nights 
Your voice echoes in my senses 
Could feel the agony that passes through 
Vanishing the lights that had been though 
Would it had been a fanciful memory 
To share note with you up to the summary 
Nothing can satiate that unfilled place 
Tried and tried but couldn't you trace 
May b someday u can feel ma pain 
Can come over and see me again 
Till it is there, will be waiting for you 
Knowing it is strangely unfair to do 
Had always missed your freebie advices 
To whom I used to reply with smiles 
Someday it makes me retriate my opinion 
To join you and had a all time reunion 
So always beautiful you had been a creature 
Setting for journey to lovely nature.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Agustin Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 4:43 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Andresen Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 3:03 PM
- A great poem, Asmat - Welcome to Poetry Soup - Best wishes for a happy new year - hugs // Sun :)
One Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 8:19 AM
Nice sensual poem Asmat.. Welcome to poetry soup..
Ara Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 10:53 AM
Thankyou !
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