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My Inspiration

Laura Breidenthal inspires me with her loving support A sweetheart, this cyber friend of mine Encouraging me to recapture a more inspirational path Which sadly, has eroded slowly by time In all my years of writing, Laura has made me feel unique Makes me feel like I have something to offer Which my many years on earth have happily instilled in me Life is like a river of fast-flowing waters At a loss, I am to express my thanks, other than to offer These simple words of gratitude I send forth Laura is the sweetest loyal friend, a truly loving soul A faithful friend, my loving spiritual source

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/26/2018 2:21:00 PM

Your words of sincere gratitude with verses laced with truly sweet poetic expression have greatly warmed my heart this morning. They brought tears of joy to my eyes, as dramatic as that sounds. You are such a light to my life and an amazing poet. It is you who inspires me! I will continue reading your poetry, old and new! Love always and forever, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/26/2018 2:56:00 PM

Hope I don't disappoint... please be gentle!!! LOL XOX

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/26/2018 2:54:00 PM

Yes!!!! I am so so happy to hear this! I will look forward to reading it when it is finished. This makes me really happy. <3~Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/26/2018 2:30:00 PM

AWWW! Sweet Laura, I am so touched! You have inspired me more than I can express in mere words, I am in the midst of writing one much like back then if I can recapture that old feeling!!! I owe you, sweet Laura! Love always and forever, Happy Jack XOXOX

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/26/2018 2:10:00 PM

Hello Jack,yes it does seem that Laura Breidenthal, has really inspires you. She sounds to me to be a great poetess. Hugs xxx-ooo.Have a nice day my friend.

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/26/2018 2:35:00 PM

Laura NEVER forgets me... I am so so blessed to have her friendship!!! Thank you, dear Darlene, once again for another of your warm visits! Love, Happy Jack XOX

Silent One

Date: 3/26/2018 1:52:00 PM

Laura Breidnethal was the first friend I made on PS, such a talented lady who gives great feedback on poems... Great tribute!

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/26/2018 2:02:00 PM

WOW! How about that... so you know of what I speak!!! Yes, not just a "nice poem" comment but truly interesting comments!!! Love this sweet soul!!! Good day, my friend!!!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/26/2018 10:08:00 AM

Lovely tribute Jack, you certainly are a ladies man, bet you wished you'd found soup 60 years ago.

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/26/2018 10:11:00 AM

Absolutely!!! So many sweet things here... blows me away!!! How's your day is going Thomas!!! Cheers, Jack Jack XOX

Maria Williams

Date: 3/26/2018 7:26:00 AM

A sweet poetic tribute to a very special friend. This is the the nicest thing Jack. I love it and I'm sure she will ...Maria xox

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/26/2018 7:39:00 AM

In the last 2 or 3 days, Laura has reviewed about 80 or 90 of my older and mushier submissions! Now that's a loyal friend, eh!!! Not just a limerick master! LOL Now you get to sleep!!! Lovsies, Happy (Indian food lover) Jack XOXOX

Sanjay Karmakar

Date: 3/26/2018 6:13:00 AM

So sweet expression of heart and soul. have great pleasure to read the poem. Good luck, my dear poet.

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/26/2018 6:18:00 AM

You are a very kind soul, my friend!!! So nice to have you drop by! Cheers!