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My Inner Self

Reaching in that hand of scorn walking through traffic encased welding heart inside my mind I could hear him throughout my kind I stand in hurt consumed by blame a question since the beginning of time I shut my eyes to dream in peace the howls upon my back release like all things the inevitable will come those unidentified features of long ago... From my window I do see a voice calling to me I awoke only to the edge of time to a world of infectious lies and the complacent days allows me to share my thoughts masters of pain, drowning butterflies whose eyes will slice my inner self with untamed obstacles, resting quietly weathered worn from time, cloudy with chances of dreaming once again ... Brooke Dylan 2014

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Date: 5/30/2014 3:29:00 PM
A great and intense write!!! Very deep and loaded with passion too. Bravooooooo!!!
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Date: 5/22/2014 6:15:00 AM
Wow! The images you create are amazing! "Drowning butterflies whose eyes will slice" is a stunning line. I never once considered the eyes of a butterfly before.
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Date: 5/19/2014 12:13:00 PM
Hi Brooke My friend these words were very moving and its no surprise how you are always able to convey the clearest vision for the reader to see and understand and feel. Beautiful write and here is a kind wish for you. Thanks for sharing this with us. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/18/2014 12:03:00 PM
Nicely written Brooke. So deep and true. Life can be so cold so often. But dreams so often come true. I hopes yours do too. Take care!
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Date: 5/18/2014 11:27:00 AM
Wonderfully deep imagery ;) I could also imagine closing the curtains, retreating into a deeper shadow,... I enjoyed reading this ^_^
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