My Inner Child

My Inner Child has led Me for decades Helping me work through My dreams, then she Stopped; I dream No more Rest.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/15/2018 9:13:00 PM

Fear not, the dreams will return...as will your inner child … Love this one!! Full of meaning and philosophical musings for every reader. :) gw

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/16/2018 7:41:00 AM

Actually, my inner child has never left me. I am glad of it because our inner child often sparks the joy in our lives. My dreams did return and they are always good ones, now. Glad you enjoyed the poem.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/15/2018 9:37:00 AM

I have had years and years of non-dreaming, but I wonder if my dreams are so magnificent they are too wonderful to remember?

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/15/2018 6:08:00 PM

That would not be so good if you write poetry based on your dreams like I do...my dreams have always been a catalyst for my creativity. Too wonderful to remember? What a loss...I'd want to remember the most wonderful ones.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/15/2018 7:08:00 AM

Beautifully written..I feel a touch of somber tone.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/15/2018 7:22:00 AM

It was a long journey; dream work makes such a difference in one's life. Thanks again.

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/15/2018 6:56:00 AM

Nice Ninette M.L. :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/15/2018 7:21:00 AM

Thanks so much.