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My Immortal A raven made no shame of it, sailed past my opened chamber door, Aghast, at last, espy my guest, the beautiful madam Lenore, Said I, madam please pay no heed, with that said, it left abhor, We then cajoled, read on my lore, exchanged a kiss, forevermore. "Love" 2020 February 18 *1st Place* Poe-etic Verse ~~charles messina

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/4/2020 3:24:00 PM

Nice followup of the Raven. Love the attached video. So cool the way the lyrics reflect in the water! Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/4/2020 4:25:00 PM

Thanks, Kim, pleased you enjoyed -- Aloha!~@wk

Charles Messina

Date: 3/4/2020 5:46:00 AM

William, John said it well. You captured your verse Poe-etic to a T. Congrats on your well deserved placement. All the best...Charlie

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/4/2020 5:57:00 AM

Thanks once again, Charlie, my dutiful friend for an opportune chance to express myself -- Aloha!~@wk

John Watt

Date: 3/2/2020 11:54:00 PM

Well done, WK, your verse captured Poe to a 'T'. Congrats on your #1 ~ John

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/3/2020 12:04:00 AM

Thank you, John, for your thoughtful share--appreciated -- Aloha!~@wk

Jenish Somadas

Date: 3/2/2020 8:44:00 PM

Fantastic poe-etic verse.. Great win william...

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/2/2020 8:57:00 PM

My thanks, indeed, Jenish -- Aloha!~@wk

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 2/22/2020 7:57:00 PM

So haunting and romantic, especially love the kiss - forever more!

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/22/2020 8:14:00 PM

Poe's balance between love and death as I exude young Lenore to life with the exit of the lamenting raven putting a spin as an explanative excerpt--Thanks for your visit/comments -- Aloha!~@wk

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/18/2020 8:41:00 PM

Most delightful, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/18/2020 9:12:00 PM

Thanks, Line!~@wk