William Kelii Kekaula Poet Verse

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My Immortal

My Immortal

A raven made no shame of it, sailed past my opened chamber door,
Aghast, at last, espy my guest, the beautiful madam Lenore,
Said I, madam please pay no heed, with that said, it left abhor,
We then cajoled, read on my lore, exchanged a kiss, forevermore.

"Love"

     2020 February 18     

*1st Place*

Poe-etic Verse
~~charles messina

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Kim Rodrigues March 4, 2020 at 3:24 PM Nice followup of the Raven. Love the attached video. So cool the way the lyrics reflect in the water! Congratulations! William Kelii Kekaula March 4, 2020 at 4:25 PM Thanks, Kim, pleased you enjoyed -- Aloha!~@wk

Charles Messina March 4, 2020 at 5:46 AM William, John said it well. You captured your verse Poe-etic to a T. Congrats on your well deserved placement. All the best...Charlie William Kelii Kekaula March 4, 2020 at 5:57 AM Thanks once again, Charlie, my dutiful friend for an opportune chance to express myself -- Aloha!~@wk

John Watt March 2, 2020 at 11:54 PM Well done, WK, your verse captured Poe to a 'T'. Congrats on your #1 ~ John William Kelii Kekaula March 3, 2020 at 12:04 AM Thank you, John, for your thoughtful share--appreciated -- Aloha!~@wk

Jenish Somadas March 2, 2020 at 8:44 PM Fantastic poe-etic verse.. Great win william... William Kelii Kekaula March 2, 2020 at 8:57 PM My thanks, indeed, Jenish -- Aloha!~@wk

Michelle Faulkner February 22, 2020 at 7:57 PM So haunting and romantic, especially love the kiss - forever more! William Kelii Kekaula February 22, 2020 at 8:14 PM Poe's balance between love and death as I exude young Lenore to life with the exit of the lamenting raven putting a spin as an explanative excerpt--Thanks for your visit/comments -- Aloha!~@wk

Line Gauthier February 18, 2020 at 8:41 PM Most delightful, William. William Kelii Kekaula February 18, 2020 at 9:12 PM Thanks, Line!~@wk