My Ill Fate

"Meeting you was my fate
That day for a coffee you gave me a date
And look ! I still wait 
I don't know what happened yet!!
I look for my luck under the pillow inside my shoe
Oh! dear luck where are you?
My mind's reducing to less little and few!
I am restless , got nothing to do!
The first time i saw you 
My heart just blew blew and blew
Your love for me was just as small as a drop of dew
That's why I feel like putting my heart on a blade
But still my love for you my love will never fade
You can give me all of your hate
But still I will and wait
Are you listening my dear ILL-FATE???"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Maverick Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 3:01 PM
Congrats on the placement Zoya
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 3:06 AM
Congratulations Zoya xx
Gasun Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 2:51 AM
Big congratulations on your awesome win my dear Zoya! love/hugs, Leonora
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June 15, 2013 at 12:40 PM
Zoya , CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thank you for entering this wonderful loving poem. Thank you for the warm feeling and smiles!!! I posted a sweet blog, to all who took the time in supporting my contest "ALL ABOUT ME..." **YES I SMILE** :-) ~xox~ LINDA
A   Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 9:46 PM
zoya amreen, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Keep the good verses coming... take care & good night :-) PD
Khemlani Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 3:19 AM
A good one! I hope some one is listening to you to make things better.
Amreen Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 6:13 AM
YAA SURE!
Amreen Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 2:48 AM
thanK YOU @MAD HU @VICKY
Hu Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 2:38 AM
:)NICE ONE
Tsiluma Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 2:29 AM
LOVELY write Zoya! 'Putting my heart on a blade' -ouch! Powerful imagery. Very nicely done.
Amreen Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 2:18 AM
hehehe my creation!!! dedicated to my loved ones
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