My Ill Fate

"Meeting you was my fate
That day for a coffee you gave me a date
And look ! I still wait 
I don't know what happened yet!!
I look for my luck under the pillow inside my shoe
Oh! dear luck where are you?
My mind's reducing to less little and few!
I am restless , got nothing to do!
The first time i saw you 
My heart just blew blew and blew
Your love for me was just as small as a drop of dew
That's why I feel like putting my heart on a blade
But still my love for you my love will never fade
You can give me all of your hate
But still I will and wait
Are you listening my dear ILL-FATE???"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/17/2013 3:01:00 PM
Congrats on the placement Zoya
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Date: 6/16/2013 3:06:00 AM
Congratulations Zoya xx
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Date: 6/16/2013 2:51:00 AM
Big congratulations on your awesome win my dear Zoya! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 6/15/2013 12:40:00 PM
Zoya , CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thank you for entering this wonderful loving poem. Thank you for the warm feeling and smiles!!! I posted a sweet blog, to all who took the time in supporting my contest "ALL ABOUT ME..." **YES I SMILE** :-) ~xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/27/2012 9:46:00 PM
zoya amreen, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Keep the good verses coming... take care & good night :-) PD
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Date: 9/17/2012 3:19:00 AM
A good one! I hope some one is listening to you to make things better.
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Zoya Amreen
Date: 9/17/2012 6:13:00 AM
YAA SURE!
Date: 9/17/2012 2:48:00 AM
thanK YOU @MAD HU @VICKY
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Date: 9/17/2012 2:38:00 AM
:)NICE ONE
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Date: 9/17/2012 2:29:00 AM
LOVELY write Zoya! 'Putting my heart on a blade' -ouch! Powerful imagery. Very nicely done.
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Date: 9/17/2012 2:18:00 AM
hehehe my creation!!! dedicated to my loved ones
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