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near ritual fire with holy chants, dressed I sat in my stylish western suit, day heat reading celsius forty two! unbearable were tailored woollen pants, my pouring sweat looked for an exit route, where to? if you wed in India, wear light dress, you sweat less and look colourful and cute, in your new suit you feel like a hot stew! in summer heat I fainted in a mess, no clue! 1st placement The Speaker contest sponsor Sara Kendrik Written 25/10/20 11 lines abc abc dbc dc rhyme with 10,10,10,10,10,2,10,10,10,10,2 syllable count on soup syllable counter

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Date: 11/21/2020 10:04:00 AM
Congrats, Krish, on this winning Curtal Sonnet, Aloha!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/21/2020 10:12:00 AM
Aloha William! Thank You, my friend!
Date: 11/21/2020 2:24:00 AM
Thanks for participating in my contest. I appreciate you taking the time and writing this nice event from your life. Sara
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/21/2020 2:44:00 AM
Sara Thank you! greatly honoured! Thanks also for hosting a nice contest in a new format!! God bless!
Date: 10/31/2020 7:15:00 AM
Fun read. Thoroughly enjoyed. Frankly speaking you poems are really light hearted. They make my day. I can understand your situation. Obviously you wouldn't have fainted. I agree about your dress point of view. It is tougher for females. Have a great day ahead. Take care Rama
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/31/2020 7:40:00 AM
Thanks Rama! That is a compliment that I shall treasure! Most weddings in India are in heat of summer as the stars favour weddings!! Mine was in May ...sweat, sweat, sweat.....
Date: 10/25/2020 6:33:00 PM
Great, Krish, it's ridiculous what we have to go through for the sake of appearance.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/25/2020 10:37:00 PM
Thanks Beth! Yes, indeed! Lesson learnt!