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"The sounds of Earth is the music of my soul." Narcissus woos a butterfly; waves strong, Genteel stages filled pages; memoirs sound, Earth graces life faces, pleased heaven bound, Wrens and bluejays consonance their birdsong. Lively swamplands prep and hopped air aloft, Rising field beds here bells spread Heather mound, Climbed rose still impose fragrance all around, Dragon fly whiz bye, hunt or naught so oft, Dogs yapping; cats hissing; a bit delayed, Gardenia's much scents nice touch unwound, Wintry Holly, cool Heartsease, best are found, Ants are sprinting up an anthill; dismayed, Mountain rams straddle rock hills, not fall down, Forget Me Nots in flower pots, e'er crowned, Baby Breaths pleased nearby Sweet Peas, basks ground, Beavers build damns, scrams, otters like a clown, Eagles and hawks birds like rocks, circling sky, Morning Glories backed stories bloom foreground, Lilacs possess purple hilltop spellbound, Antelopes will elope grass field is nigh, The desert, plains, steppes, mountains, and jungles, Lily pad ponds, chartreuse fronds, all year round, Daffodils glow star; crowd-pleaser astound, Rural, suburbs, cities, the Earth humbles. 2022 August 07 *2nd Place* Let Your Muse Be Inspired - R Form ~~Constance La France: Judged 2022 September 01 *Enclosed Rhyme

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Constance La France

Date: 9/6/2022 11:46:00 PM

Hilo, excellent Rhyme (enclosed) wonderfully penned and presented and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Let Your Muse Be Inspired, I like your image and audio too, God Bless ~

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/7/2022 8:37:00 AM

Thanks, Constance, I appreciate the placement my friend, Aloha William

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2022 4:48:00 AM

Creative way to go with this winning work. Congratulations. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/3/2022 3:55:00 PM

Thank you, Sara, appreciated my friend, Aloha~William